Saturday, April 9, 2016

RoseMary and Patrick

Love Story from Banana

There was a girl who worked in a bank. Her name was Rose Mary; she was a beautiful and stunning lady who worked as a bank cashier in the National Republic Bank. This bank was located downtown in Banana city.

The level of security of this national Republic bank was too strong. There were almost 10 security guards working there. Also, there were a lot of surveillance cameras located in strategic places to record what happens during a day. Besides, there was a man who directed the whole cameras security circuit to detect suspicious activity.

Although the bank was safe, one day it was robbed by a group of different robbers. They entered to the bank abruptly and threatened all the people who were there. These men stole all the money they could and personal belongings from that people. A total amount of $ 500.000 dollars. After almost an hour, robbers left the bank. But, when they were leaving, one of them stared at a cashier girl; who was precisely Rose Mary.

Incredibly, that man, fell in love with the cashier girl at a first sight. His name was Patrick, a tall and handsome man with a well-sculpted body. Patrick had never had the chance to fall in love with somebody or at least to think about it and this precisely, because of his job. Rose Mary was now the reason why he learnt to think, mainly to think about her.

While time was passing by, thoughts about that girl were growing in Patrick’s head. On the other hand, Rose Mary was still thinking about those blue eyes that made her feel amazed but petrified at the same time. She wondered whether, she had caught his attention, or he will take revenge with the bank office workers; because robbers were not given the security code to have access to the main cellar. A new story was about to arise or to be discovered.

Nobody at the police station knew how the robbery happened. For this reason, all the witnesses were interviewed. Also, the cameras recordings files were analyzed searching for evidence and clues that led the police to capture  the shoplifters and find who the guilty were. Rose Mary was one of the main witnesses, but also she was the one with more interest to find out the truth about that event.

In a casual day, walking along the public market, Patrick saw Rose Mary in the distance. He could immediately remember who she was and walked towards her. Later in the same place, they were waiting in a long line to claim the money from the ATM. She went first. As soon as she finished, Patrick walked just right next to her; this time she was able to see him. She realized who he was and immediately hid her bag in her jacket and got terrified. She ran away, however,  did not tell anything to the police. At that moment love was not the starring of this meeting that will be crucial and determinant.

When they both Patrick and Rose Mary were in the bus, they saw each other. This time Patrick was brave enough to ask Rose what her name was, likewise was Rose Mary to ask his. They starting to talk for a long time and they got along very well. These two, continued talking to each other .Afterwards, they started a romantic relationship in which they were not aware of the possible consequences that it could bring to their lives.

They both were about to start a romantic journey and everything was arranged. They were on the airport, in the checking office.  They had planned to spend two weeks in Hawaii. But when they were about to leave, the police caught them so they were arrested.

Patrick and Rose Mary were taken to court. Patrick was doomed to 15 years. But as he confessed everything, his sentence was reduced to 8 years. Rose Mary was accused to conspire with the robbery. Of course, she denied everything. Nonetheless, as she did not tell the truth about Patrick to the police, she was sentenced to three years in jail. They both are still there. They are still prisoners because of love.

Sunday, March 20, 2016

Paragraphs (Topic Sentences)

The role of women in Montería has improved within the last 70 years. Women used to be socially stigmatized just for being women, that is, they were the ones who were supposed to attend the whole family, actions that included: cooking, washing clothes, taking care of children, staying at home without permission to go out and also without chances to get a job, were common those days. Nowadays, women in Montería city are allowed  to be involved in different fields, like: social, politic, cultural and business. Now they are considered professionals, not illiterate as it used to be. They also, have great influence on the society.

Problems of generation gap between parents and children in Bogota are affecting their relationship. Today, parents and children are moving away from each other. As we all know, our environment has changed, so the life styles and minds of children also change. Today generation does not like other interfering in any of their personal matters; they do not like parents ordering them, and if they try and tell them what is wrong for them, they misbehave with their parents. Parents basically create generation gap themselves. They do not talk to their children and share with them. The parents are just too busy with their work and jobs around the city, that they do not have time for their family and their children. They realize it only when there is a huge distance between them. 

Thursday, March 10, 2016




IT IS ABOUT INNER FEELINGS.

Love was in the air, easy to perceive it, was for them. Those, who walk around and keep their eyes on she and he, Alf and Louh, they both peculiar persons who had not yet discovered what they were feeling for each other at that time. The most wonderful feeling was about to be discovered by their hearts and minds, by everything they were and had.

 Comments, questions, laughs and conversations were getting too unusual, in fact, everything was getting too serious between Alf and Louh, higher levels of confidence were showing up among them. As they have so many friends in common, their relationship was being supported with praises and cajolery, this, finally became their special contributions for the establishment of a relation and a reliable communication between them.

He winks his eyes; she smiles and looks at him as if he was a piece of chocolate cake. They both greet each other as if were not dating. Indeed, they are not. But, the thing that really caught her attention about him, was his particular personality and brilliant mind. Alf , was the one who  carry the torch, the one who participated  the most in classes, with concrete and abstract comments. Besides, he was the owner of the best sense of humor in history. She thought he was the flashlight that light up her world and made it brighter  .A gift from God with a remarkable behavior.