Sunday, March 20, 2016

Paragraphs (Topic Sentences)

The role of women in Montería has improved within the last 70 years. Women used to be socially stigmatized just for being women, that is, they were the ones who were supposed to attend the whole family, actions that included: cooking, washing clothes, taking care of children, staying at home without permission to go out and also without chances to get a job, were common those days. Nowadays, women in Montería city are allowed  to be involved in different fields, like: social, politic, cultural and business. Now they are considered professionals, not illiterate as it used to be. They also, have great influence on the society.

Problems of generation gap between parents and children in Bogota are affecting their relationship. Today, parents and children are moving away from each other. As we all know, our environment has changed, so the life styles and minds of children also change. Today generation does not like other interfering in any of their personal matters; they do not like parents ordering them, and if they try and tell them what is wrong for them, they misbehave with their parents. Parents basically create generation gap themselves. They do not talk to their children and share with them. The parents are just too busy with their work and jobs around the city, that they do not have time for their family and their children. They realize it only when there is a huge distance between them. 

Thursday, March 10, 2016




IT IS ABOUT INNER FEELINGS.

Love was in the air, easy to perceive it, was for them. Those, who walk around and keep their eyes on she and he, Alf and Louh, they both peculiar persons who had not yet discovered what they were feeling for each other at that time. The most wonderful feeling was about to be discovered by their hearts and minds, by everything they were and had.

 Comments, questions, laughs and conversations were getting too unusual, in fact, everything was getting too serious between Alf and Louh, higher levels of confidence were showing up among them. As they have so many friends in common, their relationship was being supported with praises and cajolery, this, finally became their special contributions for the establishment of a relation and a reliable communication between them.

He winks his eyes; she smiles and looks at him as if he was a piece of chocolate cake. They both greet each other as if were not dating. Indeed, they are not. But, the thing that really caught her attention about him, was his particular personality and brilliant mind. Alf , was the one who  carry the torch, the one who participated  the most in classes, with concrete and abstract comments. Besides, he was the owner of the best sense of humor in history. She thought he was the flashlight that light up her world and made it brighter  .A gift from God with a remarkable behavior.