Sunday, March 20, 2016

Paragraphs (Topic Sentences)

The role of women in Montería has improved within the last 70 years. Women used to be socially stigmatized just for being women, that is, they were the ones who were supposed to attend the whole family, actions that included: cooking, washing clothes, taking care of children, staying at home without permission to go out and also without chances to get a job, were common those days. Nowadays, women in Montería city are allowed  to be involved in different fields, like: social, politic, cultural and business. Now they are considered professionals, not illiterate as it used to be. They also, have great influence on the society.

Problems of generation gap between parents and children in Bogota are affecting their relationship. Today, parents and children are moving away from each other. As we all know, our environment has changed, so the life styles and minds of children also change. Today generation does not like other interfering in any of their personal matters; they do not like parents ordering them, and if they try and tell them what is wrong for them, they misbehave with their parents. Parents basically create generation gap themselves. They do not talk to their children and share with them. The parents are just too busy with their work and jobs around the city, that they do not have time for their family and their children. They realize it only when there is a huge distance between them. 

1 comment:

  1. The first paragraph is well developed. However, the topic sentence seems too limited for the supporting sentences in the second paragraph. S. S should point at developing the topic sentence.

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